Bored story...

i was bored and i had this idea for a story like it? I was a blind girl who lived in a small town in the 1800's with my older sister Suzanne who was sixteen; we called her Suz for short. My younger brother Edward, he was two, we just called him Ed. My mother Alauna at the age of thirty-five, she was both young and beautiful, my father Abe, he was forty, but of course we called them Mother, and Father. I was a bright little five year old named Violette, Vi for short, always full of questions, and stories. Our family seemed ordinary, but we were far from ordinary, we shared a secret that if discovered we would be killed; we were blood sucking fiends, vampires. We only preyed on the dead though. One night though while we were feeding, our secret was revealed, my father told my sister and I to run, as my mother handed Ed to Suz. They told us they loved us very much, and dashed toward the mob to create a diversion, but half of the crowd followed them as the other half chased after us. My sister tripped as Ed fell from her arms and onto the ground. He immediately started to wail. Suz searched franticly for him, but she could not see a thing for it was pitch black. She looked up, there was two moans. “Mother, Father!” I perceived, shocked. When Suz finally found Ed she cradled him in her arms and sang our mother's soothing tune. Suddenly her head snapped upward, the man was standing right above her. she glanced at me, she yelled "run" to me the man cried "be gone demon of the night!" and I heard the wooden stack plunge into her. I shrieked in terror when i remembered Ed, I listened as her body fell to the earth, a lifeless corpse. He heard Ed and picked him up, I could tell he picked him up by the neck for he was gasping for breath. He laughed a heartless laugh, and did the same procedure. "Edward!" I screamed in panic. He too dropped to the ground, resting in a cold, breathless sleep. I ran, my heart throbbing in pain.